Post by Krad Zephyros on Dec 24, 2011 11:25:18 GMT -5
For me to except somebody as uber as this,I'm gonna need more descriptions. First and foremost his appearance.
The picture is very epically drawn and I get the sense of a badass kinda dude, but I need to know what he looks like in both his human form and his uber demon form.
I won't pick with you about your personality, though I would appreciate it if you added a little bit more about how he interacts with others besides saying he's just like Krad. If he is like Krad in anyway, I doubt he'd enjoy being compared to anyone else.
Also your abilities. My 1st question is what is Shell Integrity? You're gonna have to give a very detailed explanation of that. Second, what are his abilities limits. Can he just summon lava burst after lava burst until the earth is completely drained of it, or does his attack only form three at a time a few feet apart in a straight line? We have to know these things. Only pick two starting abilities for now. Anymore and you'll have to purchase them.
And the big one: History.
I like how you tried to dodge it by saying, "honestly, you don’t want to hear me explain these." You know you're not gonna get over that easily. Humor me.
Once these changes are done, (and you add the secret word of course), I dont see why I wouldn't accept him.
The picture is very epically drawn and I get the sense of a badass kinda dude, but I need to know what he looks like in both his human form and his uber demon form.
I won't pick with you about your personality, though I would appreciate it if you added a little bit more about how he interacts with others besides saying he's just like Krad. If he is like Krad in anyway, I doubt he'd enjoy being compared to anyone else.
Also your abilities. My 1st question is what is Shell Integrity? You're gonna have to give a very detailed explanation of that. Second, what are his abilities limits. Can he just summon lava burst after lava burst until the earth is completely drained of it, or does his attack only form three at a time a few feet apart in a straight line? We have to know these things. Only pick two starting abilities for now. Anymore and you'll have to purchase them.
And the big one: History.
I like how you tried to dodge it by saying, "honestly, you don’t want to hear me explain these." You know you're not gonna get over that easily. Humor me.
Once these changes are done, (and you add the secret word of course), I dont see why I wouldn't accept him.
