Leo Dirosa (gonna start with a more meister char)

[Leo Dirosa]

Appearance

Picture:

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Description: He is an energetic kid, and a pretty professional fighter, using both guns and swords, his smile, as often as its seen, inspires people to fight, to not die, to use their power to win, he has yellow eyes, amber really, his hair is bright silver and his skin is a dark peach color, Physically he’s strong and fit, able to pench-press atleast 250 lbs, when it comes to speed its his real advantage, able to run 100 meters in around ten seconds, he’s just not the brightest, often goofing and falling into a trap, or getting caught when on a stealth mission.

Other: He wears a brown jacket and many silver jewelry pieces, mostly bracelets and a necklace, he wears a baseball cap with the texas longhorns symbol on it, he has brown sweatpants with flayed ends, he also has three scratch marks on his face from when he was wrestling his namesake in a zoo after it escaped.

Basic Information

Name:Leo Dirosa
Age:20
Gender:Male
Race: Meister
Height:5’7
Weight:180
Languages:Spanish, English (southern Drawl)
Occupation:Hunter

Skills

TECHNICIAN:He is a Meister Willing to weild either guns or blades, or one of each.
Special Ability: Games Wavelength: It lets him call out a game, some simple childs game, but its more, the games come to life, and the consequences are real. Games:
Color Tag: Probably the most odd, but more devastating, whomevers turn it is calls out a color, then attacks, when a hit lands, it deals damage to the person equal to the amount of that color they have on their body, unless the color is black, then it deals less damage the more color there is.
More to be added

Starter Ability: Assassin’s Shot, is he charges his wavelength enough, he can fire a single, powerful shot from his hand, inflicting major damage, other them that, he’s mediumly skilled at attacking with his wavelength.

Personality

Alignment:Chaotic Good (Shibusen, but for strange reasons)

Likes:Soda, Chicken, Hot Chicks.

Dislikes:Stupid people, his friends being hurt, and evil people.

Description:His heritage is mostly southern, giving him a rather southern accent, luckily his family originates from the north, so he doesn’t share the racism, though he does share their love of guns, ever heard the saying: “You might be a redneck if....” well, fifty percent of them apply to him, he doesn’t breath the life of a redneck, he just lives half of one. Other than that, he tends to be a kind kid, living peacefully and willing to live in any situation, rugged and dirty, or tame and clean, preferring the former though.

BIOGRAPHY

Leo was born in texas, the son of Devan Dirosa and Julia Dirosa, he’s lived an easy life, simple tasks, simple living....till his thirteenth birthday when his dad gave him a machete, since then he had trained day in and day out with the blade, adapting his style to different blades and different weapons, on his sixteenth birthday he was awarded a pistol, a handgun to be used for hunting, this was how he adapted his style further, his fighting now incorporating both fire-arms and blades, this worked spectacularly well, he was so happy about maximizing his potential, that he turned into a local vigilante, saving people, taking down robbers, stuff like that....then he was discovered by the DWMA because when on a mission, he called out the word red, firing a gun at a mans bandana, it nearby blew his head off, a Meister named Ox recruited him after the founding of the SRA, and he has trained since, after being told his regular weapons wouldn’t work on pre-kishin, he now needs to wait for a demon weapon to accept him. He stays at the DWMA despite constant mocking for the very reason he came, his sister was possessed by a pre-kishin, and he wants her back.

ROLEPLAY SAMPLE

Additional

Uhm.....nothing really..... Password: Zephyros

[Krad Zephyros]

Hmm, okay. I think the best way to approach this is to work down the list.

First thing's first: In the description of his appearance, you should only be describing his appearance and not his personality. Of course, you could add some personality traits such as, "he has a smile that exactly mimics his cocky personality." But other than that, it should be just his physical appearance. His hairstyle and color, his eye color, his facial features, the cat-like scars on his cheek, his skin color and tone, and also his clothing if you'd like to take up more space. These are the details you want to add in the description of his appearance. Again, you can throw little previews of his personality in there, but you're going to need to repeat them when you get to the personality section of the application.

(And yes, i've used that picture in the past, but have no intention of bring that character back, so you can have it.)

Next, under race, you should say if he's a Technician, a Weapon, or a Witch. Not southern. Leave that for the history, lol.

For the skills section, please only include the two skills that you are going to be using. You can leave the description of his Wavelength Games up if you'd like, However, You should only have One Wavelength Game in the list followed by your Starter Ability: Assassin's shot.

The wavelength games, however, are extremely creative and something I've never seen or even thought of before. Definitely another glimpse at your trademark creativity

For your personality, you must add a detailed description. Nice try tryna get out of that, but its not gonna work. I need you, as one of the original members, to set the standard for all new applications. Do your best so that others will know the high-quality applications we look for here at the SRA

With that being said, Add a bit more to your history and RP Sample. You should add some things in the history about when you learned you were a technician, how you developed your Wavelength abilities, and, of course, the strange reasons why you're still enrolled with the SRA. I want to know everything there is to know about your character!

The Roleplay example should also be a bit more descriptive. Its a bit messy and I can barely tell what's going on. I would suggest taking it out completely and changing it to something a little more relaxed. Say, he woke up in the morning and was getting ready to go to school. Something easy that you can fill with descriptions of his appearance, his thoughts and attitudes, and a basic schematic of how he interacts with the world.

Once you make the appropriate changes, let me know and I will be glad to take another look at him.